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Comic 1411 - Memory Shard - Noctis/Aurelia page 5 ( Guest comic by argylefox )

29th Sep 2016, 1:23 AM
Memory Shard - Noctis/Aurelia page 5 ( Guest comic by argylefox )
Average Rating: 5 (13 votes)

Author Notes:

Centcomm 29th Sep 2016, 1:23 AM edit delete
Centcomm
Im not going to jinx anything by commenting on my medical condition .. but im recovering from having the stent placed and all the other stuff ..

Indifferently Evil
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mjkj 29th Sep 2016, 1:48 AM edit delete reply

Great ending, Argyle.


Ok, Cent, get well soon... *hugs carefully*

argylefox 29th Sep 2016, 2:20 AM edit delete reply

Ending?
mjkj 29th Sep 2016, 3:14 AM edit delete reply

Oh, the sidestory continues? Great... =)
HiFranc 29th Sep 2016, 1:58 AM edit delete reply

I recall reading and/or seeing that ending somewhere before.
Sheela 29th Sep 2016, 2:17 AM edit delete reply

Wait, what ?
sigpig 29th Sep 2016, 8:08 AM edit delete reply

Read the blog, Sheela...
Sheela 29th Sep 2016, 8:46 PM edit delete reply

Nuuuhh .... it has spoilers!
Visvires 30th Sep 2016, 8:03 AM edit delete reply
It has the entire story. Ready now. No waiting. Plus, these comments have spoilers:

Kyle dies at the end of the story. But a passing space wizard brings him back and grants him quantum immortality. He'll survive any story we get to see. We'll never see him die.
Sheela 30th Sep 2016, 5:45 PM edit delete reply
Ryu Santos 29th Sep 2016, 2:13 AM edit delete reply
It's over? No cliffhanger? Great story Argylefox.

And Cent get well at a reasonable pace.
argylefox 29th Sep 2016, 2:20 AM edit delete reply

Not yet.
Dragonrider 29th Sep 2016, 2:15 AM edit delete reply

Hope recovery goes well. Don't rush it you really aren't as well yet as you think you are, take it from the voice of experience.
Guest 29th Sep 2016, 4:28 AM edit delete reply
I'm not trying to be a critic, but didn't someone's white hair clean up awful fast? Or is that just how someone remembers it?
argylefox 29th Sep 2016, 8:28 AM edit delete reply

You have it dead on there. Later on you will see a little more 'real' version. This whole thing is an old memory from when she was a child - it isn't great. That is why the shadows are so stark, and colours vivid. And why Noctis has no shadows on her, but her clothes are pitch black. It's MOSTLY real, but not really real.
mjkj 1st Oct 2016, 2:53 AM edit delete reply

So, we will see Noctis' version next? Great...
Centcomm 1st Oct 2016, 10:19 PM edit delete reply

that is coming right up on the next installment!
Gilrandir 29th Sep 2016, 8:37 AM edit delete reply
I am enjoying the story and think (at least insofar as I am any judge) that you have done a fine job bringing it to life, @argylefox. (I particularly like the last panel here with the introspective Aurelia looking backwards with her mug of coffee/tea.) So much of the original story seems (to me) to take place in the internal monologues of the participants that it must have been challenging to select scenes that would complement the narrative and move as much of the story as possible out of the realm of the textual and into the visual.
argylefox 1st Oct 2016, 11:16 AM edit delete reply

Thank you!

Actually, I often 'see' things when I read them. As I am reading books, I picture how I would set them out in a movie or a comic. It's relatively routine, for the most part (a couple of pages later on... not so much).
chk 29th Sep 2016, 12:21 PM edit delete reply

Rest and take it easily CentComm.
Matt Knab 29th Sep 2016, 4:12 PM edit delete reply

We're thinking of you, CC, and wish you a speedy recovery!
Haegan2005 29th Sep 2016, 7:32 PM edit delete reply

First Class artistry and scene building Argyle!

I can see why Cent is tickled pink at your effort.
highly irregular 29th Sep 2016, 9:10 PM edit delete reply
Off topic, I've started rereading from the beginning and MEGA WOW.
Things have somehow managed to get even better than I remembered them (unlike poor Aurelia)
Sheela 30th Sep 2016, 5:46 PM edit delete reply

The first 100 pages or so, have been redone.
So they are now much better than they used to be. :)
Timotheus 30th Sep 2016, 4:35 AM edit delete reply

Yea! I figured out how to log in again! Nice update. I hope you're recovering nicely.
Avoid watching the presidential debates. They'll only aggravate your medical condition. (They should post a warning on the TV before the broadcasts.)
DLKmusic 30th Sep 2016, 7:34 PM edit delete reply

Once again ArgyleFox, you've proven you have a real knack for the Macabre! The blurred image in panel 3 is especially masterful.

Makes me glad indifferently Evil is so tongue in cheek, I'm not sure I could handle a long running script like this, lol!

Once again, my friend... Brilliantly done.

PS. I'm still praying for you, Cent! Get better soon, but not too soon! We don't want you pushing yourself before you're ready!
argylefox 1st Oct 2016, 11:17 AM edit delete reply

Most of the macabre part comes from the writing. I'm just putting my silly scrawls in tune to it.
Centcomm 1st Oct 2016, 10:19 PM edit delete reply

dont sell yourself short Argyle.. this is totally awesome what you have done with this. ..
Cal 1st Oct 2016, 9:06 PM edit delete reply
Love ya, Cent. Rest up, girl.

thanks for keeping us up to date on what's going on - that not-knowing is the hardest gorram part out here in the 'Verse.
Centcomm 1st Oct 2016, 10:26 PM edit delete reply

thank you.. I am alive and well.. and after last time im waiting to say what im doing .... looks both ways and knocks on wood.. i got lucky last time and only needed a stent.. not another round of by passing.. Whew!
Sheela 2nd Oct 2016, 2:16 AM edit delete reply

Good to hear you are still among us. :)

How is Krissy doing with her guilt ?
And her nose ! Is that free of cannonballs too ?
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