After uploading part one of Little Phoenix I decided to check out your Data Chasers comic. So far, I'm loving it, it's awesome (and I'm not just saying that 'cause you helped me out, I really like it!)
Great job! Keep up the great work (also LOVE the graphics, I'm a teeeeeeeny bit envious but in an inspired, good way.)
Funny, I noticed that you and I have similar writing styles and story concepts. I'm glad to see you're not afraid to take it out there, you know? Hey, that's when it gets fun! :D
This kinda reminds me of Marsha Brady trying to convince her parents that it's ok for her to go to a sleepover at a friends house. Of course, Marsha was never abducted...
Once you finish the reboot and copy over the the "1st Draft" are you going to link the new pages to the old ones so people can click over to compare the changes?
There's something suspicious about this page. I can't put my finger on it for some reason. Oh, wait, I know why I can't *sneezespoilerssneeze* Sorry, my allergies came over me there.
I,he always liked the art concepts you come up with. The holoemitters (or whatever term you use) on Calliope's workstation is one example. The dialog flows naturally and is very believable.
Edit - And now on the new pages, you don't use FINE. Still, Lynn is asking for a karmic strike with her breezy promises. :-D
Great job! Keep up the great work (also LOVE the graphics, I'm a teeeeeeeny bit envious but in an inspired, good way.)
Famous last words. ;)
Cindy Maybe, but Marsha? naah.....
And YAY welcome to the comments ! :D