It has the entire story. Ready now. No waiting. Plus, these comments have spoilers:
Kyle dies at the end of the story. But a passing space wizard brings him back and grants him quantum immortality. He'll survive any story we get to see. We'll never see him die.
You have it dead on there. Later on you will see a little more 'real' version. This whole thing is an old memory from when she was a child - it isn't great. That is why the shadows are so stark, and colours vivid. And why Noctis has no shadows on her, but her clothes are pitch black. It's MOSTLY real, but not really real.
I am enjoying the story and think (at least insofar as I am any judge) that you have done a fine job bringing it to life, @argylefox. (I particularly like the last panel here with the introspective Aurelia looking backwards with her mug of coffee/tea.) So much of the original story seems (to me) to take place in the internal monologues of the participants that it must have been challenging to select scenes that would complement the narrative and move as much of the story as possible out of the realm of the textual and into the visual.
Actually, I often 'see' things when I read them. As I am reading books, I picture how I would set them out in a movie or a comic. It's relatively routine, for the most part (a couple of pages later on... not so much).
Off topic, I've started rereading from the beginning and MEGA WOW.
Things have somehow managed to get even better than I remembered them (unlike poor Aurelia)
Yea! I figured out how to log in again! Nice update. I hope you're recovering nicely.
Avoid watching the presidential debates. They'll only aggravate your medical condition. (They should post a warning on the TV before the broadcasts.)
thank you.. I am alive and well.. and after last time im waiting to say what im doing .... looks both ways and knocks on wood.. i got lucky last time and only needed a stent.. not another round of by passing.. Whew!
Ok, Cent, get well soon... *hugs carefully*
Kyle dies at the end of the story. But a passing space wizard brings him back and grants him quantum immortality. He'll survive any story we get to see. We'll never see him die.
And Cent get well at a reasonable pace.
Actually, I often 'see' things when I read them. As I am reading books, I picture how I would set them out in a movie or a comic. It's relatively routine, for the most part (a couple of pages later on... not so much).
I can see why Cent is tickled pink at your effort.
Things have somehow managed to get even better than I remembered them (unlike poor Aurelia)
So they are now much better than they used to be. :)
Avoid watching the presidential debates. They'll only aggravate your medical condition. (They should post a warning on the TV before the broadcasts.)
Makes me glad indifferently Evil is so tongue in cheek, I'm not sure I could handle a long running script like this, lol!
Once again, my friend... Brilliantly done.
PS. I'm still praying for you, Cent! Get better soon, but not too soon! We don't want you pushing yourself before you're ready!
thanks for keeping us up to date on what's going on - that not-knowing is the hardest gorram part out here in the 'Verse.
How is Krissy doing with her guilt ?
And her nose ! Is that free of cannonballs too ?