Comic 1605 - Underdressed
Author Notes:
I chose this particular "boutique" interior set specifically because it has a dressing-room area. The intention was for Cella, Lynn, and Acantha to be back there having their discussion, while Noctis waited up front. During that period of time, someone was supposed to walk by Noctis and issue the directives shown in the previous page. However, because I didn't clearly communicate that to Cent, we've ended up with a plot hole the size of a planet, wherein it looks like no one would have been able to approach Noctis without the other three seeing and/or hearing it immediately while talking about ID cards and terrible fashion choices.
Also, the awkward cropping of the two close-ups on Noctis in the last page came about because Cent actually put the speaker into the visible frame, despite it being specified in the scripting that the person was supposed to be unseen, and so she had to do some last-minute editing to correct the panels.
Sorry about that. Short of doing major re-shoots, I don't think we can fix it, and this scene has been difficult enough as it is.
Comments:
If that's so, then who here has the authority to give Noctis orders? Either someone else has entered, or Steph is trying to order Noctis around.
Beyond that, great visuals and dialogue, and it is still an intriguing hook!
but Noctis is waiting to see where this is going, an maybe play along (a little)..
reminder : her inhibitor was pretty much disabled,, when d!*khead told her "to do what was best for New Rome." IE: what ever she thinks is right.!
@robnot, those are interesting points. I have to say, that if it were me, I'd be reluctant to toss orders at Noctis unless I was authorized, inhibitor or no. Noctis can remember things. Even if I were authorized, I would feel uncomfortable ordering her around. :D
@Centcomm, was it those Alien Ninja Bunnies of Doom? :O
Independent of what they have actually watched.
I would call that a h*** of a run.
My take on the previous page was that the command came via some sort of private communications channel, not a person. If the difference matters, make a note for the rework you're inevitably going to do on these pages.
I'm placing my bet at 6 months. :P
Also, don't worry about the miscommunication thing, if this is a "plot hole" then what we usually see in other places are at least craters! :D Your comic's quality is top!
Not to worry about the 'plot hole'. We'll take it as some mysterious person/being whispering softly off-screen before fading away - just adds to the dramatic tension. AAARRRGHHH!
Secondly, we are in 4th now. š
they do this so new comics get a view,, and to see if the top 10 still has a 'following'.. ( quite a few pateron's quit voting once they start paying...)
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As far as the 'authorization issue', that is still an intriguing mystery. It is possible these are not 'coercive orders', but Noctis is complying because if a deep-cover operative in potentially hostile territory approaches you in this manner, you might feel they have a better understanding of the current situation than you do and decide to 'play along' -- at least at the outset. Or these might actually be coercive orders, deriving their authority from an as-yet unknown source. Maybe it is Future-Acantha traveling back in time to give Present-Noctis orders for what will eventually be some vitally crucial plot-point? We'll just have to wait and see. ^_^
Somewhere along the way a creative team communication breakdown was bound to happen. I'd be honestly surprised if over the course of time there hadn't been many unfortunate narration turns that boxed you into an unintended corner.
We can all pretend it didn't happen and you could go along as was originally intended. In short run just have a clarification on this and the previous comic until they can be fixed if it is going to really screw up the story line.
It isn't like other major pieces of work weren't changed countless times after their initial release (cough Star Wars cough).
Lucas decided he did not want Han to be ruthless some years later, and then stole our shared experience.
The loopholes they jump through to justify that statement is... Entertaining...
My day job requires me to spend considerable analytical mental power on identifying and resolving gaping logic holes. Stories whether read (e.g. DC) or watched (e.g. Star Wars) are about a mental escape. I am happy to follow along with how the story teller wants to tell their story. I am perfectly willing overlook the occasional plot hole or redo to get the story right.
In the case of stories like this, you can look at it in a number of ways. You can look for and expand and expound holes and anomalies, or look at it for ways it could work. It enhances the experience to work with it. I usually prefer the latter. In other cases, just shut off the analyzer.
Heck, they could decide that everyone was too distracted by the lampshade dress to notice someone was talking to Noctis. After all, it is Acantha that is the primary individual to be protecting. It is assumed that Noctis can take care of herself.
God help us when Disney starts in on destroying Indiana Jones, because you know it's coming.
It's THAT warped...
And suddenly I had the thought that Acynthia might actually know of that title because of her friendship with the crazy A.I. That's actually kind of scary.
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