Comic 4 - Birthday Girl

17th Feb 2007, 10:29 AM
Birthday Girl
Average Rating: 5 (13 votes)

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Centcomm 11th Jul 2013, 7:36 PM edit delete
Replaced art - 7/11/2013
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Julia Soulber 23rd Sep 2012, 7:27 AM edit delete reply

yea... I'm starting this comic over lol... too much good ness that i missed
Centcomm 23rd Sep 2012, 7:29 AM edit delete reply

YAY the art isnt quite to my standards today but Rose wont let me re-do it :P

This comment has been rendered Moot :D YAY new art!
highlander55 11th Jul 2013, 8:13 PM edit delete reply

Page 11 is out of sync with story line.
Centcomm 11th Jul 2013, 8:15 PM edit delete reply

was still uploading :D
Stormwind13 23rd Feb 2014, 5:32 PM edit delete reply

Mary is a LOT less creepy now than she was back in the original story. :-D
Centcomm 23rd Feb 2014, 5:46 PM edit delete reply

Thats one thing I was going for - making her a lot less creepy :D glad she came out better :D
Stormwind13 23rd Feb 2014, 7:51 PM edit delete reply

Night and day difference (and the night was Halloween!!! :-D).
Centcomm 23rd Feb 2014, 7:57 PM edit delete reply

hahah good one !
Matt Knab 13th Aug 2014, 2:52 PM edit delete reply

Is Mary one of the AI's? I assume from the bright eyes (which look great, btw) and colored speech bubbles.
Centcomm 13th Aug 2014, 3:38 PM edit delete reply

Well Mary is a Android ,She is not a AIS system like Cent-comm.
Sleeper 5th Nov 2014, 1:51 AM edit delete reply

Only after reading this first panel did the meaning of your screen name finally click in my mind.
Zimriel 17th Feb 2016, 9:43 PM edit delete reply
There *is* a case for keeping Mary and other androids in that Uncanny Valley...

But anyway, thanks for taking the time to tweak the artwork. I think I saw this comic at the time it was first posted and dropped it in part because the humans (not androids) made my head hurt. I felt bad about that because the story looked like it was going to be great.

Everything looks beautiful now.
J 14th Dec 2017, 3:29 PM edit delete reply
Calliope is it? looks fantastic in that first panel. The layering and the shadows are great. Her eyes look more alive than nearly anything I've seen. I keep going back to stare at that panel.

Lynn still has that odd 3D art plasticky look that makes me cringe. Your story writing and world building and dialog and movement overcome that *ick* factor though.
nekaz 10th May 2022, 2:06 PM edit delete reply

reminds me of one of those 3d fighting game chicks but i cant remember which series
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