after much comments i finally switched to a "comic page" layout - me and my "editor / writer had to relearn a lot of stuff to get this right but i think it looks a lot better.. comments welcome :)
I agree; splitting the action into panels will save alot of space. :)
Also, I know we've only just been introduced to CeCi, but she's now my favorite character. I love how she sounds so sweet and innocent, and yet is trained/programed to shoot or kill. XD
CeCi got all the 'innocent' that CentComm discarded years ago. :-) At this stage she seems pretty naive, which would make some sense. I mean she is less than 2 days old here.
Oh and I'm so glad you went to a expanded format. Story moves along better this way. Though if you need to show details, cut the panel count down to do so.
The pages named Flesh and Nanotech (3 of them) where the new Dolly is waking up, keep them with the single panel. I mean the detail, it looked more like a photograph than a CG picture. :-)
Also, I know we've only just been introduced to CeCi, but she's now my favorite character. I love how she sounds so sweet and innocent, and yet is trained/programed to shoot or kill. XD
Sometimes the simplest solutions really do work... :D
Or would it be "a little politeness goes a long way"?
Oh and I'm so glad you went to a expanded format. Story moves along better this way. Though if you need to show details, cut the panel count down to do so.
The pages named Flesh and Nanotech (3 of them) where the new Dolly is waking up, keep them with the single panel. I mean the detail, it looked more like a photograph than a CG picture. :-)
thank you again :D