Why the edit? I remember there being a segment about a failed escape attempt from a damaged mag-cuff causing the wrist damage the last time I went through the archives. It's now something done by the kidnapper in retribution? I'm curious as to the reasoning.
It does indeed make more sense storywise, looking back from where this develops. I have to admit that I like this better than the original, which makes your revamping efforts a brilliant success. Bravo!
I dunno, I sort of liked the wiggling out of the cuff part but this works too, maybe next revamp try a combination of the two ? a broken wrist from Dari that lets her slip out of the cuff ?
Saw THAT coming. 17 year old rich girl versus 30 something street fighting woman who has already shown she can handle a seasoned *male* thug. Good job on the realism so far.
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