Comic 44 - No More Fighting

7th May 2007, 3:10 PM
No More Fighting
Average Rating: 5 (10 votes)
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KarToon12 31st Jul 2012, 9:51 AM edit delete reply

Poor Lynn. I hope she makes it out of here. :(
WitUnderPressure 3rd Jan 2015, 7:06 PM edit delete reply
Hopefully she won't need to use the toilet anytime soon
Jack Simth 14th Jul 2015, 4:09 PM edit delete reply
Why the edit? I remember there being a segment about a failed escape attempt from a damaged mag-cuff causing the wrist damage the last time I went through the archives. It's now something done by the kidnapper in retribution? I'm curious as to the reasoning.
Centcomm 14th Jul 2015, 4:14 PM edit delete reply

This in my opinion makes more sense and flows better storywise .. the original just never sat well with me. Hopefully you still like it ?
StellarJay 18th Jul 2015, 1:02 AM edit delete reply

It does indeed make more sense storywise, looking back from where this develops. I have to admit that I like this better than the original, which makes your revamping efforts a brilliant success. Bravo!
Centcomm 18th Jul 2015, 1:13 AM edit delete reply

Thank you Stellar! .. that really means a lot to me :D
Jack Simth 30th Jul 2015, 3:54 PM edit delete reply
Oh yes, it's still a good page. I was mostly just curious as to the reasoning.
Oldarmourer 11th Jun 2019, 8:06 AM edit delete reply
I dunno, I sort of liked the wiggling out of the cuff part but this works too, maybe next revamp try a combination of the two ? a broken wrist from Dari that lets her slip out of the cuff ?
Zimriel 18th Feb 2016, 9:52 PM edit delete reply
Saw THAT coming. 17 year old rich girl versus 30 something street fighting woman who has already shown she can handle a seasoned *male* thug. Good job on the realism so far.
Centcomm 19th Feb 2016, 1:20 AM edit delete reply

Thank you!!! Yes I tried to go with a better personality that the old generic thug :)
Oldarmourer 11th Jun 2019, 8:08 AM edit delete reply
Yeah, Lynn got a valuable lesson...
"never fuck with the fucked up"
learn it, live it.
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