Comic 595 - Fractured Peace...01

28th Jul 2012, 8:18 PM
Fractured Peace...01
Average Rating: 5 (10 votes)

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Centcomm 28th Jul 2012, 8:18 PM edit delete
This is a side story written by a Datachasers fan and our new addition/modeler Jay. also known as Visoneer here on Comic fury the whole story "fractured world" will appear on a seperate comic strip page soon...

This is the Prologue.. Enjoy, this is considered canon...
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cattservant 29th Jul 2012, 3:51 PM edit delete reply

Bring out the Artillery!
Dawn Hart 29th Jul 2012, 5:34 PM edit delete reply
Beautifully done. :) The sentiment is definitively Dr. Silver. "I'm amazed they figure out how to dress themselves in the morning." LOL Though you might consider some slight re-phrasing of dialogue for clarity: "Your laboratories are staffed with morons." is slightly more clear. Also, "Compared to you, Doctor, every one is a moron." would make better sense. As it is, it implies that everyone else is a moronic medical professional.

She looks beautiful and stylish! You've done a great job with her model and pose. I am particularly enamored with the way her eyes came out: cold, calculating, condescending, yet stunningly beautiful. Once again, fantastic work.
Centcomm 29th Jul 2012, 5:43 PM edit delete reply

Dawn Hart is the "creator" of Dr Silver - Also that is "One" of her Drone types...
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Stormwind13 7th Oct 2013, 7:19 PM edit delete reply

I agree Dawn. Dr. Silver looks great here. I don't think I want to try to get TOO close to her, I like my skin intact not flayed from my bones, but she LOOKS good. :-D
Speedy 23rd Oct 2016, 11:33 AM edit delete reply
Actually, "Compared to you, Doctor, everyone is a moron." is correct, if he's saying that everyone in the world is a moron, compared to her. "every one" implies that he hired a bunch of morons.
There is no implication of everyone being medical professionals. "Doctor" is just how he is referring to Dr. Silver.
KarToon12 14th Aug 2012, 10:00 AM edit delete reply

Leaving off here for today. Can't wait to see what happens next. :D
Centcomm 14th Aug 2012, 10:11 AM edit delete reply

your almost caught up! woooot!
Stormwind13 7th Oct 2013, 7:17 PM edit delete reply

When are we going to see this story all in one place as promised? :-)
mjkj 12th Feb 2014, 6:18 AM edit delete reply

Hmm, when and where is this promised "fractured world" going to air?
WitUnderPressure 5th Jan 2015, 8:17 PM edit delete reply
The irony of Dr. Silver questioning someone else's ability to dress...
antrik 6th Oct 2016, 4:11 PM edit delete reply
Hehe... Just what I was thinking :-)

Many of the outfits in this world scream "wardrobe malfunction waiting to happen" -- but hers is more like, pre-emptively out of order...
velvetsanity 13th May 2017, 11:06 AM edit delete reply

The vast majority of female clothing available for daz/poser figures is unfortunately slutwear. That said, think about how a female Tony Stark would dress...
Oldarmourer 14th Jun 2019, 6:10 AM edit delete reply
I'm thinking double sided tape is a major fashion accessory in this day and age ;)
Oldarmourer 14th Jun 2019, 6:11 AM edit delete reply
or more precisely, sold as lingerie...
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